Posted June 17, 200718 yr This is a little poem i wrote for a Creative Writing class i'm doing at school. I thought i would share it! So You’re Just A Budgie Belinda Pye So you’re just a budgie, that’s what they all say Yet my heart bursts with joy, just to see you play So you’re just a budgie, so small and cheap and plain But your sweet bubbly chatter, always dulls my pain So you’re just a budgie, nothing interesting or new How I love your sleek smooth feathers, so beautiful and blue So you’re just a budgie, to be caged all day long I would let you fly free always, even though they say it’s wrong So you’re just a budgie, an easy childhood pet What a devilish little mind you have, underestimated I bet So you’re just a budgie, that’s all they’ll ever see Know my friend, you’re more than that, you mean the world to me
June 17, 200718 yr I like it Bea Thank you for sharing. I love your new sig too, but I am wondering why Fiz isn't in your avatar yet? Feathers.
June 18, 200718 yr Author I like it Bea Thank you for sharing. I love your new sig too, but I am wondering why Fiz isn't in your avatar yet? Feathers. Well Fizzy technically isn't mine...i needed to fill a spot in my sig. I might make a new avatar with him today though. That is a wonderful poem. How long did it take to come up with it? Budgielover Well it took a long time of sitting and staring at a blank screen (poetry isn't really my thing), but once i got the idea it didn't take long. :sad:
June 18, 200718 yr very nice Bea :sad: Like the new siggy too....I thought you adopted Fizzy ...how are Tim and him getting along?
June 18, 200718 yr Author Well Tim feeds, waters and cleans the cage (when i tell him to). But i seem to be the one who gets him out to play all the time.
June 18, 200718 yr That is a gorgeous poem Bea. I hope you get tops marks for that. It is quite meaningful.
June 18, 200718 yr Well Tim feeds, waters and cleans the cage (when i tell him to). But i seem to be the one who gets him out to play all the time. Tapping foot nothing against Tim...he knows you will do it Bea (your a wonderful sis), by the way I hope he is feeling better.
September 13, 200717 yr Have only just seen this thread, in fact I haven't been into the poems before. I think that poem is really lovely and sums up everything I feel about my darling boy..... he does mean the world to me so I understand exactly what you mean. Well done and here's hoping you write some more. Chrissie
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